I aksed for a feeling
He gave me love
I converted it into pain
And now, I blame him.
I asked for a kiss,
He gave me one on my lips
I converted it into a peck,
And now, I blame him.
I asked for money,
And he gave me a 100 dollars
I converted into Rs 5000
And now, I blame him
I asked for peace,
And he gave me a hug,
I converted it into violence,
And now, I blame him
But I asked for trust,
And he gave me lies,
I converted that into doubt,
And now, I blame him
But I asked for assurance,
And he didn't say a thing
I converted that into indifference
And now, I blame myself
3 comments:
Hey
As always there is certain parts of it which are amazing to read
it actually starts as a narrative a bit
but i personally loved the ending
The misunderstanding between action words and deductions from it is very well narrated...
Love the use of contrasting images like peace hug and violence
its just a bit contrite and looks forced sometimes
but i like the end coz now it seems you know silence can be reassuring !
Hey i really like the poem.. I could never write like that.. Keep up the good work..
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Heyo........ itz so good to read ur emotions again :)
Juz keep going on
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